Dear Yuval,
I am sorry that you hated this way of doing the book report. It was harder for you but I can see that you put in the effort and did almost all the assignments (no setting). Unfortunately you really need to be careful with your writing. You have MANY grammar mistakes and also spelling mistakes as well as problems with mechanics (capital letters, punctuation). I would suggest you write first using WORD with spell check and grammar check then copy-paste into the BLOG.
I appreciate the effort you put into it.
Your final grade is 80.
Yours,
Karen Noll Stanger
Wednesday, May 27, 2009
Sunday, May 24, 2009
Reflection
I hate this way of doing a book report.
I don't prefer it to regular way.
no it wasn't worthwhile.
I didn't learn anythingfrom this stupid idea.
No i don't suggest we continue with this type of learning.
I don't prefer it to regular way.
no it wasn't worthwhile.
I didn't learn anythingfrom this stupid idea.
No i don't suggest we continue with this type of learning.
Sunday, May 17, 2009
Questions
1. Who was Einon teacher?
2. What was the dragon's term for Einon to give him a half of his heart?
3. Who was Einon father?
4. What happened to the dragon at the end of the last fight?
5. Einon was bad or good person?
6. Why did the dragon gave half of his heart to Einon?
7. Did sir Bowen survived in the last fight?
8. What was the dragon's name?
9. Which person at the story was a professional archer?
10. Did Einon survived in the last fight?
11. Did the dragon survived in the last fight?
12. How is Einon's father called?
13. How is Einon's mother called?
14. Who killed Einon's father?
15. When is Einon's father died?
2. What was the dragon's term for Einon to give him a half of his heart?
3. Who was Einon father?
4. What happened to the dragon at the end of the last fight?
5. Einon was bad or good person?
6. Why did the dragon gave half of his heart to Einon?
7. Did sir Bowen survived in the last fight?
8. What was the dragon's name?
9. Which person at the story was a professional archer?
10. Did Einon survived in the last fight?
11. Did the dragon survived in the last fight?
12. How is Einon's father called?
13. How is Einon's mother called?
14. Who killed Einon's father?
15. When is Einon's father died?
Sunday, May 10, 2009
Entry The Book
If i would go to the story with the characters, i will pack a bag with a first aid pack and a wepon. I would take a shirld suit and an armor. I would take a lot of food and some drink and my clothes.
that's what I would take to the story with the characters.
that's what I would take to the story with the characters.
Diary
Dear diary, tomarrow is the big fight and i'm very scared about it. The fight is going to be me and the dragon against Einon and his army. I'm going to give all i got and i don't going to lose. I still worry about my life and I don't want to die.
I fell we can win this becuase we have the dragon and we can fly and spit fire drom the sky.
on the other hand they also can win because they have very big army and some fire balls.
I wish everything will be pass succsesfully and we will win without any people died.
your's, sir bowen.
I fell we can win this becuase we have the dragon and we can fly and spit fire drom the sky.
on the other hand they also can win because they have very big army and some fire balls.
I wish everything will be pass succsesfully and we will win without any people died.
your's, sir bowen.
Sunday, April 26, 2009
The ending
..." comeon Bowen" the dragon said, let's fight. dragon!! you we can't kill Einon because you have the same heart. I know sir bowen... we Have two options, at one we will succsess for sure and at the two option, i dont know if it will work... in one we can kill me and Einon will die withe and in two we can try to convince Einon to give me the other half of my heart and then, the legand say thet if he will give me back the other half he will be good guy again. they went to Einon and they succses to convince him and evryone were good and races.
The plot
the plot in my story (dragonheart) is when Einon get half of the dragon heart for to save his life and Einon promised that he won't be like his father and he will be a good guy but he became bad guy so sir Bowen and the dragon went fight Einon but because the dragon has the same heart with Einon so when Einon die so do the dragon. In one line: The last dragon and a disillusioned dragonslaying knight must cooperate to stop an evil king who was given partial immortality. The climax is when the dragon decided to kill himself for to kill Einon. I didn't surprised from the story because it was expected that the dragon will see that he can't kill Einon so he will kill himself for killing him.
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